gcse’s were round the corner and its at this point in time you could see who was preparing and who wasn’t.
some people say that people react to stress differently, some people fess up and confront the thing that’s causing the stress and others would neglect it.make the issue discreet.
but that’s how i spent my l life, putting on fake smiles pretending everything was ok and holding in all thoughts. it became a way of life, a habit a easy way out.it was easy to say ‘im fine’ or ‘im ok’ who actually tells people there issues,who openly says i haven’t been feeling like my self lately all my ‘friends’ are drifting away from me.i feel lonely.
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June 15, 2015 at 5:05 pm
Kyro, I am still frustrated by the lack of tangible transition (as a reader, not as a teacher).
I think you need to give the reader something more tangible – you are giving us lots of questions but you are not telling us how this person has changed.
For this transformation story to be a transformation story, the change needs to be clear, concrete and symbolic.